Writing Beneath the Surface

At the glorious Finca El Cerrillo in March and June 2025, our theme was ‘writing beneath the surface’. We considered what this means to us, and how we can use the concept to make our writing deeper, more multi-layered, and richer perhaps.

Through visualisations and thought-showers, we explored how we could get beneath the surface of an idea – to dig deep and develop that idea into a story, a poem, or another piece of writing.

We thought about place and how we can connect characters to their environment; how we can get the most out of place and use it as an important element in our writing. And then we looked at characters themselves and considered ways in which we could get to know them better.

After a day off mid-week… some of us ventured into nearby Competa to look around the village and have lunch, some went to the seaside, and some stayed at the finca to relax, chill, maybe write some more…

We then discussed ways of getting our deeper writing on to the page, by using internal thought, for example, and self-image.

In our final morning session of the week, we considered symbolism and re-thought some well-worn clichés, as well as constructing a poem from associations connected with a certain emotion.

During the week. groups also created a collaborative piece, which were shared on our final day. There were some brilliant variations – including stories, flash fiction, a play, a song, a poem and more.

Both weeks were great fun. They included Spanish conversation with Keeley around the pool (in June) early morning pilates with Anju on the yoga deck, Elaine’s team quiz, Sheila’s lateral thinking, Rosemary and Catherine’s singing evening, and Keeley’s salsa dancing lesson. All optional of course, but all a fabulous addition to our weeks. Thank you all.

We enjoyed delicious meals at the finca and we also went out to some lovely restaurants in Canillas and Competa.

 

 

In March my new hardback of ‘The Italian Flame’ was published and Sue and Gordon and members of the writing group organised a celebration including a cake beautifully decorated by Gordon. What an amazing thing to do. It blew me away… 🙂

In June, we sadly said goodbye to Sue and Gordon Kind who have run the finca so magnificently for so many years and also given us ‘Gordon’s Desert Island Discs’ which we have so enjoyed.

But we are looking forward to meeting Donna and Jaime who will be taking on the business and we will be continuing our writing holiday with them. (And Sue and Gordon have promised to come back as day students…)

Roll on 2026….

 

 

 

 

Summer Scorchers 2025

Here are some of the scorchers I have been enjoying this summer…

The Lost Bookshop by Evie Woods ****

Three strangers – Opaline, Martha and Henry come together in this warm and compelling dual time-line novel.

Martha is escaping an abusive relationship when she discovers an unexpected sanctuary, working for Mrs Bowden as her housekeeper. But there is something unusual about her employer, and something unusual about Martha’s lodgings too – her bedroom seems to be growing and changing into something it might have been in the past…

Meanwhile, Henry is searching for The Lost Bookshop of his academic research, when he comes across Martha, and an unlikely friendship develops. They can help one another, it seems, but are they ready to?

Together, they discover more about the bookshop, and its proprietor Opaline who was a trail-blazer – fiercely independent and determined to escape an arranged marriage, at great personal cost.

The author weaves the personal journeys of all three characters and the two timelines together into a magical storyline. Highly recommended.

 

Shy Creatures by Clare Chambers *****

Another gorgeous read from Clare Chambers.

Like the superb ‘Small Pleasures’, the 1950s setting is impeccably evoked, down to the smallest detail. Helen works as an art therapist in a psychiatric hospital/ welfare centre; she is unmarried and involved with Gil, a charismatic doctor, who holds some radical new ideas about psychiatric care.

When a new patient, William Tapping, arrives at Westpark, a ‘hidden man’ who has always lived with his aunts, never ventures outside and is not registered to live at that address, Helen becomes involved in solving the mystery. Why did William become so reclusive – what happened in his life to make it necessary for him to hide away?

William gradually responds, showing a remarkable artistic talent, and with a lot of digging on Helen’s part, the story of his past slowly emerges. As she finds out more about William, Helen begins to question her own relationship with Gil and makes some personal discoveries of her own. Highly recommended. I loved it.

 

Broken Country by Clare Leslie Hall *****

This is a love story, but it is also so much more. It is an intense exploration of family relationships and it is about love, loss and human frailty.

Beth is only seventeen when she meets and falls in love with Gabriel. They enjoy a perfect summer together, but there are obstacles – they come from very different backgrounds and his mother is against the relationship. When Gabriel meets Louisa – clever, glamorous and rich – at Oxford, Beth fears that she might lose him.

After their break-up, Beth turns to lovely and reliable Frank, a farmer, and makes a life with him. They have a son, Bobby, and they work the farm with the help of Frank’s younger brother Jimmy. But when Gabriel and his son Leo return to the village, there is a shooting and everything changes. Someone is on trial for murder…

This book is so cleverly structured that the reader finds out the truth slowly. And it is only when we know everything that we can understand the actions of the characters. The book explores how it is possible to love two men at the same time – this is Beth’s fate – and it is the reason that tragedy strikes.

Very highly recommended. My book of the year so far.

 

James by Percival Everett ***+

The premis of this book – to give voice and identity to the unheard, those treated inhumanely as slaves, must be applauded. Despite this, I wasn’t gripped by it.

James (previously the slave known as Jim) is forced to become a runaway. With Huckleberry Finn, he has adventures, suffers ill treatment and philosophises about the nature of freedom and equality.

James has taught himself to read and like other slaves, he is able to speak fluently and not just in what he calls ‘slave language’ as the slave owners believe. His education, enables the author to satirise white behaviour in US society, along with all the nuances and glaring examples of racism, as we now understand it. This conceit, or contrivance by Everett felt heavy-handed and didn’t fully work in my opinion, although it was humorous and poignant in places.

It is however, a moving and thought-provoking read, full of action and dialogue, but also philosophy. Everett explores the relationships between black and white, between father and son, and between friends. He explores the nature of reading and writing, the balance of power and the need for everyone to have the right to tell his or her story. Because of this, everyone should probably read it.

 

The Last Time I saw You by Jo Leevers ****+

Georgie is about to become a mother when she sees someone’s picture in a news article; it is her own mother, who disappeared twenty years ago when Georgie was young. How could Nancy have abandoned her children? Georgie needs to know.

She contacts her estranged brother, Dan, with whom she used to be close, and together they set out to find her. All however, does not go to plan. Nancy has disappeared again. Can they find her and can Georgie get some answers to all her questions and re-establish her connection to her brother too?

As readers, like Georgie and Nancy our two points of view, we are caught between their new lives and the past. Is there a way of finding peace? Have they all been hurt too much to recover as a family and re-unite? We need to know, because Leevers has made us emotionally invested in her story. It is a story of love, loss and abuse. It’s brilliantly written and I couldn’t put it down. Highly recommended.

The Feelgood Festival in Oslo

Last week, I was invited to take part in the Feelgood Literary Festival held at Cappelen Damm publishers in Oslo. There were a mix of international and Norwegian authors, brought together because their novels fit into the genre of ‘feel good.’ And we were made to feel good ourselves, because our Norwegian publishers gave us such a warm and hospitable welcome.

We all did some social media filming and interviews, plus afternoon interviews on stage (mine was with the lovely Christoffer Holst from Sweden).

In the evening there was a romantic backdrop to our second interviews, this time with Sarah Natasha Melbye.

We also visited the bookshops in Oslo for signings…

And met readers and authors at the festival, who were interested in our books.

 

 

 

 

If this sounds like a lot of hard work… there was also the chance to explore the beautiful city of Oslo. The sun was shining and so I went on a silent electric boat trip up the fjord and beyond.

 

 

 

And also visited the famous Vigeland sculpture park in the Frogner Park with more than 200 sculptures by Gustav Vigeland (1869–1943) in bronze, granite and cast iron.

An amazing experience. Thanks so much to my lovely Norwegian publishers Cappelen Damm for hosting me.