Writing at the Finca in March

Every time we visit the glorious Finca el Cerrillo we have an amazing week… Different groups bring different experiences and since we always tackle different writing topics, no week is ever the same.

This week the weather was on our side. Warm sunny days meant that we were able to have lunch outside on the terrace and our afternoon feedback session siting on the ‘Palm Deck.’ On our day off midweek, several of us walked the short distance to the nearest village of Archez for lunch; others tried a more challenging walk and a few of the group stayed at the finca to write and make the most of some me-time.

In the morning sessions we covered the writing of flash fiction and short stories (good practice for the tandem story later in the week), sensory overload (taking in autobiography and descriptive writing),  the significance of objects and bringing variations into our writing. We also looked at novel beginnings using books plucked at random from the finca’s library.

Patricia was kind enough to provide a stimulating watercolour for beginners activity one afternoon and Elaine organised a fun evening quiz. We had music and dancing for Louise’s birthday and a hilarious singalong run by Rosemary. On the final night Gordon did his usual ‘desert island discs’ night.

This was another special group with writers of all genres and experiences; everyone combining into a dynamic whole in order to make the week an entertaining and fulfilling one. Yes, it was definitely a writing holiday to remember…

 

 

 

Winter Chillers

The Image of Her by Sonia Velton ****

Stella and Connie have never met and never will. So why is Stella stalking Connie’s every move on social media?

These two characters share the narration of this novel. We learn about Connie’s life in Dubai with Mark and their two children. Connie is living the ex-pat lifestyle but with some guilt and when she learns how badly some of the local women are being treated by their ‘madams’ she is determined to try to help. Meanwhile there are rifts appearing in her marriage – she and Mark seems to be drifting apart.

Stella is suffering from a past trauma. We know she had to care for a narcissistic mother with dementia, and we know she lives for the delivery and returns of goods she orders online but never keeps. We know she is damaged… But the rest of her complex story unfolds gradually as the novel progresses. There is an underlying mystery at the core, which is both cleverly constructed and ultimately satisfying.

This book is beautifully written and the story had me gripped right through to the poignant ending. Highly recommended.

 

French Braid by Anne Tyler ***

In French Braid, Anne Tyler introduces us to Serena and her boyfriend James having a conversation (almost an argument) about the lack of closeness in Serena’s family. Tyler then moves seamlessly back in time to when Serena’s mother Lily, her sister Alice and her brother David were young children. Most of this is in the viewpoint of Mercy, Serena’s grandmother.

As her children grow older, Mercy decides to spend more time in her art studio and away from her husband Robin. In fact, she intends to move into the studio entirely, because she wants to be free to do whatever she likes whenever she likes, although the fact that she no longer lives at home is never mentioned by her family.

This is a family saga written as only Tyler can write it; it is by turns fascinating, thought-provoking and profound. Sometimes it feels as if the story is going nowhere – but that’s because it’s a slice of life rather than a story and that’s how life is…

 

Reputation by Sarah Vaughan ***

Emma Webster is a hard-working politician who holds various causes close to her heart, for example, the issue of revenge porn. Her marriage to David was, we learn, a casualty of her ambition and her career and he is now married to their daughter Flora’s piano teacher Caroline, who was also a friend of Emma’s. Most of the time Flora lives with David and Caroline, though she also stays with Emma, and the relationships between all of them seem amicable enough.

However, things swiftly begin to unravel for Emma. She is threated by one of her constituents and she is viciously trolled on social media. She makes an error of judgement with a journalist she trusted, Mike Stokes, and that is only the start.

Things are also unravelling for Flora. She is being bullied at school, until, in retaliation, she too makes an error in judgement which backfires for both her and Emma.

Most of the book is concerned with the resulting court case. Emma is on trial for murder and we gradually learn what happened on the night in question, as witnesses emerge and more information is revealed.

Will she be convicted or will she be found not guilty? What really happened and who sent the message that led to someone’s death? These are the questions that kept this reader interested and gripped, although at times the court case felt rather long and drawn out and the final denouement was hard to believe. However, this was still an enjoyable read.

 

Saving Missy by Beth Morrey ****

Missy (Millicent) Carmichael is 79, lives in Stoke Newington, London and is very lonely. Her children have left home – her son Alastair who she adores, has moved to Australia with his wife and son, and she is estranged from her daughter after a big row. She misses Leo, her husband, and she is still living in their large family home by herself. She knows that she needs to get out and about and she needs to do something to tell her son about in order to justify an email, and so she goes to the park nearby. Here she meets Sylvie and Angela and her son Otis, who reminds Missy of young Arthur, her grandson. Little does she know that these women are going to change her life for the better. She suddenly has friends, and a reason to leave the house. She even agrees to look after a dog and finds herself a job in the library. Missy’s life becomes full and busy.

The story is told in first person (Missy’s perspective) and this was highly enjoyable as she has a dry and cutting sense of humour. I’m not generally a fan of ‘uplifting fiction’ (not sure what that says about me) but the characterisations here lifted the book into a humorous, observant and thought-provoking read. There is also sadness and poignancy though as Missy reflects and remembers events from her life, but yes, the book is uplifting too…

This all makes for an emotional and highly enjoyable read. My Book of the Season and not chilling at all…

 

My Darling Daughter by JP Delaney **

Fifteen years ago, Susie Jukes gave a baby up for adoption – although later we discover that the situation was more complicated than that. Since then, however, Susie has turned her life around and she now has a music career, and is happily married to Gabe, a successful musician, who lost his own daughter Leah to leukaemia some years earlier. The one thing that would make their life complete would be to have a child together, but after several miscarriages, this still hasn’t happened for them.

Out of the blue, Susie’s daughter contacts her on social media. Now called Anna (rather than Sky – the name Susie gave her) she asks to meet. She tells Susie that she is unhappy with her adoptive parents and Susie and Gabe feel compelled to help her.

However, in Delaney’s books, things are rarely what they first seem, and so it is with Anna/Sky. The story is told in short punchy chapters through the viewpoints of Susie, Gabe and Anna/Sky respectively. These very short chapters do drive the story forward well but their brevity sometimes gives the reader no chance to get involved with the viewpoint character and this for me was a disappointment. There is no doubt that this is a twisty – and often unsettling – read and it is thought-provoking too on the subjects of adoption and abuse. But… although I am a huge fan of JPD, this was not one of my favourites.

 

The Whalebone Theatre by Joanna Quinn ***

An epic story set mostly in Dorset and France. The action begins in 1920 as three year-old Christabel is about to be presented with a ‘new mother’ her stepmother Rosalind. Unfortunately, her father Jasper cannot get over the death of his first and beloved wife and Rosalind doesn’t much like children, so Christabel is left to her own  devices which include having exciting adventures and wishing for a brother. The author whisks us confidently through these years of Christabel’s growing up, moving seamlessly between the perspectives of Jasper, Rosalind, Jasper’s brother Willoughby, Christabel, her sister Flossie and others besides. Christabel gets her brother and as they all grow up, we enter the war years and the story focuses on this and continues until the war is over.

The children’s upbringing is unusual, to say the least. When they construct their ‘whalebone theatre’ from a beached whale, the title of the book starts making sense. All three children are highly imaginative and the theatre is important to them, not just because it takes them away from reality. In the book we meet many other eccentric characters, including Taras the Russian artist and his ‘savage‘ children and a whole host of party-loving Londoners.  But ultimately, this is Christabel’s story; a story of love, loss and of people who are different and who don’t fit in.

The adult characters are all flawed and believable, the research is excellent, the author’s style is fresh and innovative and I enjoyed reading the book very much.

Autumn Pages

Six fire-crackers to warm you up this autumn…

How to Kill Your Family by Bella Mackie ****

A tantalising prospect for Autumn… Haha. I was drawn to this book by its title and guessed it might be similar to ‘My Sister the Serial Killer’ in tone. It wasn’t, not really. There was a less comedic element – it felt more real; this killer is deadly serious.

Most of the book is written in first person narrative from the viewpoint of Grace, who wants to avenge her mother. Marie was badly treated by Grace’s father, Simon Artemis, a married, rich tycoon who refused to acknowledge or provide for her. Marie died in poverty, having brought up her daughter alone, and Grace has become bitter and determined to make her family suffer… by killing them off one by one.

The plot is made more complex by the fact that Grace is writing the journal in which she confesses all, in prison – although it soon transpires that she has been convicted of a murder she didn’t commit, rather than one she did.

The author takes us between contemporary narrative time with Grace writing her memoir in prison to the past narrative, taking in a few murders on the way.

Will Grace get away with it? Will she win her appeal? And will anyone find out her secret? These are the questions that provide the narrative tension and make us want to read on. Equally compelling is the writing. Mackie’s narrator is an intolerant, harsh and witty critic of human nature and behaviour in general and I couldn’t help but warm to her… (Well. She’d had a bad start, after all 😉).

But the ending provides a nice twist which I found fairly satisfying. I just hope Grace agrees with me – because we never actually find out… Recommended for those cynics among us who appreciate a harsh wit 😊

 

The Invisible Girl by Lisa Jewell ****

How does she do it? This is another brilliant story from LJ. The Invisible Girl is Saffyre, a young girl who has had her share of trauma which resulted in her going to see a child therapist/ psychologist Roan Fours. Although he considers her ‘cured’ she is not so sure and so begins a bit of an obsession as she begins to follow him and to find out more about his family…

Moving on to the viewpoint of Cate, Roan’s wife… We realise from the start that there are and have been marital problems – but he seems like a nice guy, they live in a nice place and their two teenage children are relatively normal. But of course, this is a Lisa Jewell book so nothing is quite what it seems. In fact, everything and everyone is rather creepy when you come to think of it. And this is Hampstead!

When Saffyre goes missing, the obvious suspect is Owen Pick, the especially creepy guy who lives opposite the Fours family and who has already been suspended from his teaching job because of alleged sexual misconduct. But quite a few people know more than they are saying – especially Saffyre, the Invisible Girl. The characters are brilliantly developed and convincing and the fast pace will keep you turning those pages as fast as you can. Another masterclass in how to write a gripping psychological drama – it’s dark and it’s thought-provoking and there will always be a few surprises along the way. Highly recommended.

 

Three Hours by Rosamund Lupton ****

This story takes place during a dark and tense three-hour period in mid-winter during which a Somerset school is held under siege by gunmen. It is told through the eyes of various teachers who are desperately trying to protect the children they care for; two Syrian refugees, Basi and Rafi who are brothers and who have already gone through terrible trauma during their young lives; the mother of a boy who simply cannot be found and the police officer who is leading the investigation into the possible identity and psychology of the gunmen and the attack. Using so many different viewpoints made the book fragmented, with a structure made up of a lot of short sections, but this worked in the context of this particular subject matter, even adding to the tension.

The book is dark and fascinating and Rosamund Lupton delves into the psychology with an expert and subtle hand and mind. Above all though, it is uplifting – exploring the lengths of bravery people can reach as a matter of instinct, the way in which they can overcome the effects of trauma and suffering and what they had thought to be debilitating depression or shyness. Every character has their part to play. Indeed, role-play and theatre become central to the plot as one group of children is trapped in the theatre, apparently the safest place in the school, and they continue to rehearse Macbeth in order to distract themselves from what is going on outside.

Despite the rather unlikely and implausible ending, which seemed unnecessary (children pretending to be trees? Why??) I found the story gripping and yet told without unnecessary melodrama; the emphasis being on the unwavering strength and bravery of humankind. Highly recommended.

 

The Paper Palace by Miranda Cowley Heller ****

This story is set mostly in Cape Cod, a place very close to the heart of Elle, the main narrator, who has spent most of her summers holidaying there. It opens just after Elle has found out something important concerning her past (though we’re not told what). What we are told is that she has just had sex with her oldest friend Jonas, a man she has always loved but never been able to be with. The problem being that they are both married to other people and their spouses are inside the Big Cabin only yards away. What will Elle and Jonas do next?

Following this dramatic and emotive opening, we are taken back to Elle’s beginning – to her birth, her childhood, the traumatic events that led up to this moment. Interwoven with this narrative we have the current holiday and the beginnings of Elle’s guilt and indecision, wrapped up with her feelings about her husband and her three children. This structure works well and it was always clear to me where we were in narrative time. It also added to the tension as we wait for her decision.

Only after all of Elle’s secrets are revealed (in particular the one that she shares with Jonas alone, which has created a bond between them but which also prevented them from being together) will we find out what Elle and Jonas do next. I found the ending a little confusing. Who does she choose? Reading back, I think there are enough clues for us to know.

It is the characters that make this novel sing – they are flawed, interesting, funny, intense and charismatic (though not all at the same time…). I loved the passionate intensity of Jonas, Elle’s soul-mate, but also the humour and solidity of Elle’s husband Peter, a solidity that she believes she needs in her life. Elle’s mother Wallace is a joy, her sister Anna is bitingly funny and Elle herself is suitably complicated. Best of all, they are all believable. The setting is an appropriate backdrop to the emotional drama and the author combines darkness and humour effectively to make the novel both thought-provoking and also a compelling read. Highly recommended (but beware of issues of abuse).

 

One of the Girls by Lucy Clarke ****

Six young women, one hen weekend in Greece and one mysterious narrator dropping interesting nuggets suggesting the darkness about to unfold…

Early on, six viewpoints are rather a lot to absorb and it’s easy to get the characters muddled up (at least it was for me) but a little perseverance and they soon emerge as six very different characters, each with an unexpected agenda. All the characters are well-drawn and every woman has her flaws as well as her strengths, making them believable and empathic, although there were one or two I found it impossible to warm to.

From the start, we begin to suspect that a) every woman has something to hide and b) something is going to go horribly wrong during this hen weekend. These two factors give the narrative pace and great page-turnability. Add to this a stunning backdrop of a Greek island complete with a feast for the senses and relationships in jeopardy and this novel becomes one of the most gripping I’ve read for a long time.

Full of twists and surprises, this is another excellent and fully satisfying read from Lucy Clarke.

 

Still Life by Sarah Winman ****

A love letter to Florence, this certainly is… I was in Italy when I read it, and maybe this was why the descriptions of a Florence in the 1940s, then the 1960s, 70’s, 80s then back to the 1920s were so magical. Reading about that city before the hordes of tourists made it what it is today, is enough reason to read this book. But there are more reasons…

The story centres around two characters who meet in Florence in 1944. Ulysses Temper is a young soldier, Evelyn Skinner, a late-middle-aged something teacher, art critic, intellectual and Bohemian. The meeting has a profound effect on them both. Ulysses returns to London at the end of the war, to his much-loved and charismatic wife Peg (who now wants to divorce him but who will always remain in his life) and his pals, Col, the loud-mouthed pub landlord, Cressy the wise eccentric, Pete, the emotional song-writer and pianist, and Claude, the genius parrot. It is an interesting group… The dialogue between them leaps off the page with wit, life and authenticity; they are loud, loyal, kind and hilarious. But what will Ulysses do next? It turns out that he is born to be a traveller, just as his name suggests.

Evelyn meanwhile, continues her life and love of Florence, art and beautiful women. She has an equally fascinating cast of friends, including E.M. Forster, the artist Dotty, the tight-lipped Margaret and the poet, Constance Everly.

Will they or won’t they meet again? Still Life is exactly that: a portrait of the small – and big – and often everyday things that make up our lives. And it is a love story of course. A little on the long side. But beautifully written and highly recommended – whether you happen to be in Italy, or not.